Heroes, space oddity or Life on mars By David Bowie

Thanks so much! I'm pleased you liked it and I will keep writing and people like you who say such kind words keep me motivated :)

Its supposed to say wrote*

Thabks that's some good advice, thanks fir taking the time to help me, you're a star

I do enjoy doing them and I've experimented but once I find something I enjoy (a hobby) I will put off doing it. When I finally do do it I have great time. I love reading and listening to music etc but I just put off doing them and can't figure out why

I know I'm answering my own question but I'd say David Bowie is up there he was such a visionary

I've always been able to sing without any tutoring

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Thats what I based the poem around so I'm pleased it translated. thankyou I appreciate it

Thankyou, I'll try that. have a nice evening to you too :)

Wow, thanks so much, you didn't ramble i enjoyed hearing your opinion. What you said reassured me as I'm more of a poet than a writer. This is the first story I've written in years so to hear you enjoyed reading it means the world to me. I will elaborate on the first sentence right after I introduce the mother. (Ofcourse this being a rough draft the structure may change, taking you feedback into account)

Thankyou for taking the time to give me such constructive criticism. I don't really write stories so I'm very inexperienced, its good to know how I can improve